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She was considered a loner,
by everyone in our class.
For some reason I was drawn to her,
They thought it wouldn't last
Because she was mean,
they told me to stay away.
But something about her caught my attention,
and I couldn't go away.
I loved her.
She was a sad little girl
with no hopes or dreams.
All because her mother,
hit her everyday.

She'd come to school with bruises, bumps and scrapes,
each day a different excuse.
"I fell", "I was in a fight", "I thought I could Fly"...
Eventually she told the truth,
I even started to cry.
I was very sad for her,
I thought I should tell,
but she grabbed me by the arm..
and made me promise to keep quiet.

I kept her secret safe,
I cried with her and helped her through.
The night she went "missing",
I searched and searched and searched.
I went home,
upset about her being gone.
I woke up the next morning,
got ready to go to school,
maybe she'd be there...

I heard rumours,
about her being burned to death.
Another was her being skinned and stabbed,
When I got home I saw her face on the news,
I sat there,
stunned when they said they found her dead...

-R.I.P
Sharon Reynolds
©2004-2009 ~crimsonwrist
:iconcrimsonwrist:

Author's Comments

I dedicate this to my dear friend,
Who died in grade 2,
Which is so very young...
Her life was lost,
To violence in her home.
R.I.P
Sharon Reynolds

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:icondeadreflection13:
wow...great poem

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all you think i say is bla bla bla...your wrong
:iconcrimsonwrist:
Thanks! I enjoyed writing it, minus the fact that I cried often...Thinking about her...
But yeh, thanks dude.
:fusionrock:
:icondeadreflection13:
made me want to cry

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all you think i say is bla bla bla...your wrong
:iconcrimsonwrist:
Wow...Really?
Thanks eh?
:fusionrock:
:icond-monix:
Damn..i can totally relate to this poem. Very sad, you tell a story in this poem and that's what i love. Definite fav. :nod:
:iconcrimsonwrist:
Thanks,
it's one of my favs too,
just because of why I wrote it...
and who it's for...True story!

:fusionrock:
:iconnellaf:
Made me wanna cry too... So sad, yet beautiful poem... =/ :hug:

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c'est quoi, la normalité?
:iconinadreamworld:
a beautifull poem..its very emotional

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Is this the real world..or are we just somebody's dream?
:iconcrimsonwrist:
Thanks...
I need a link to check out your stuff..

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